The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/12
Rhythm and imagery are not on holiday in this poem. My favorite: ‘Til empty yawns into my face. I can just see that!
I would read this poem out loud several times. There are opportunities to make the rhythm sing. Nice job. Guess we take more holidays from God that he takes from us!
04/12/12
Interesting and well done. I particularly liked the last part. Good job.

God bless~
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level 4 and 12 overall!