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This is a fascinating story. I enjoyed the characters and really liked Miriam. I think we all have encountered Miriams in our lives. I enjoyed how the story unfolded. The ending took me by surprise (I did see the conversion coming but not the fire) and that doesn't happen often. This is a good read.
04/12/12
This was excellent! What a fantastic story.

I appreciated the conversion, and explaining that "Christ became our Passover" which is clearly noted in many passages in the Bible.

I loved the entire story, and was saddened yet happy at the conclusion.

Great job. Thank you!

God bless~
04/12/12
Very good! Thanks for this lovely, well written message containing the gospel and the gentle way it was handled in your story.
04/13/12
What an excellent story with a great message and well written. It had a happy/sad ending. God bless!
04/15/12
This was a great story and I found myself anxiously waiting to see what Mr. Percy was going to say during their passover meal. Great job.