The Official Writing Challenge
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A "stop-and-think" entry. A unique take on the topic. Very well written. Congrats to the writer.
A "stop-and-think" entry. Unique take on the topic. Very well written. Congrats to the writer.
04/12/12
Wow! Powerful execution of the topic. This was so clever, and so intense. I can see this in a magazine. Great job!

God bless~
Very fun to read and identify with. Great job!
nice "oops" ending.
Wow I feel like you have been eavesdropping on my thoughts. Just last week my family was out of the house for a few days each on a different errand and I noticed that when I cleaned the house it stayed clean and I didn't open the cupboard to find someone had eaten all of the food. When they came back I grumbled how much easier it was when the only one to pick up after was me. But it seemed I also forgot how lonely I felt and scared. This is a perfect poem. It gets right to the heart of it all.
Congratulations for ranking 9th in level 4 and 14th overall!