The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/12
Oh my heavens, this touched my heart so very much! what an incredibly touching story. I simply love it!

The entire piece from start to the powerful finish, was a wonder to read. Well written, and cleverly crafted. I truly hope this gets a recognition.

Simply fabulous. My heartstrings played with this line- "Even now, the old wound in her heart could occasionally ache with stabbing intensity, like phantom pains in a foot that was no longer there" Oh how poignant.

Loved it. God Bless~
As I read this I saw a novel unfolding, and then a movie. This is a character with the hint of internal conflict and the potential for either growth or disaster. Hope you go on to develop it more. Good job.
This is really, really good! I'm so glad I took the time to read it. A superior piece!
Your character was very real, and I enjoyed her holiday almost as much as she did.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level four and 11th overall!