The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 439 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Nice job! You have a real gift - describing a place so well that I want to go there. I can almost smell the sea! Beautifully done.
04/12/12
This all sounds rather British to me. Tell me where it is, I'm already packing!
04/12/12
Beautifully done. I felt as if I were reading a British magazine sitting onboard a ship, and seeing this all in my mind's eye.

The descrptive narrative and story overall was exceptional. Nicely done.

God Bless~
Read like a postcard. Well done.

Well written and engaged all our senses.
You made excellent pictures of your holiday for your readers.
Congratulations for ranking 18th overall!