The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/12
Simply powerful and beautifully done. Thank you.
God Bless~
04/12/12
In reading entries, I see that the Easter holiday is fresh on people's minds. This is a sweet poem and expresses how we all feel sometimes and yet, the reality is that Jesus does keep the score! Good job.
Oh this is perfect. I feel like you have been hiding in my thoughts. But you are able to express them in a way that flows and rhymes that I could never accomplish.

I noticed a couple of tiny things. The ! felt like it was part of Jesus' thoughts and should be inside the quotes and a minute'[s needed an apostrophe.

But other than those tiny things I think you spoke volumes with your words. It's a message many can relate to and that many need to hear. Thank you for touching my heart.
04/12/12
Such a fresh thought after celebrating Easter. This was bautiful and flowed smoothly. Good job! God bless!
Really good stuff. I can see this in a church bulletin.