The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/12
A beautiful poem completely on topic, and flowed so smoothly.

Nicely done. God Bless~
03/19/12
LOVE this line: Silence growing louder. So vivid, and a good fit to the topic.
03/21/12
A very creative approach on topic and an interesting read. Strength for tomorrow is surely what we always need.
03/22/12
There were so many word pictures created in this piece that were so engaging -actually helping you to feel the trail. I enjoyed the message of strength and overcoming fear. A powerful piece of writing.

Not sure if the center alignment was intentional - if it was, wasn't sure what the goal was. I personally would have preferred it to be left justified - just think it may have read easier - but that's just me.

A powerful piece of writing. Thanks!
03/22/12
A hearty Congratulations!
God Bless you~
Wow this is powerful and the visual effect stunning. Congratulations on your HC and on placing 14th overall!
03/23/12
Very creative and engaging work. Congrats on your HC.