The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 632 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
03/15/12
A beautiful story of God's love washing away pain.

Great job of "showing" rather than telling. Nice job with this piece.

Loved the "release" of inner conflict when given over to our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. Loved it!

God Bless~
03/15/12
A beautiful story of God's love washing away pain.

Great job of "showing" rather than telling. Nice job with this piece.

Loved the "release" of inner conflict when given over to our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. Loved it!

God Bless~
03/16/12
Love how you ended this - and great descriptions throughout too. Nicely done, my friend!
03/16/12
Oh, I think I'm going to cry. Simply beautiful.
03/17/12
I'm sure many can relate to this story, I certainly do. Great job!
You've presented a beautiful story of forgiveness. I've missed seeing your stories.
03/17/12
Genuine forgiveness ... one of the greatest achievements that we can make through Christ's power in us.

Wonderful story! It's great to see you back in the Challenge. :)
03/17/12
Beautiful! Love the ending, the dialogue is easy and realistic and the whole story has a wonderful quality. Great job!
Your style reminds me of Jan Karon, one of my favorite authors. Economy of words, yet rich in description. A beautiful presentation of forgiveness, at least the start of the process.