The Official Writing Challenge
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Great work! I love this poem! Poetry is my favorite!!
10/26/05
Trusting. Excellent way to show our trust.
10/27/05
I enjoy reading the flow of poetry from the heart. Nice work! God bless ya, littlelight
10/28/05
Great line - As a sparrow, helpless and hungry waits for sustenance from her mother, I wait in expectation
10/31/05
Very good use of free verse technique. I liked the open form. Walt Whitman would be proud.
A BIG thank you to all who read my prose and then took the time to comment. This was something different for me, and I'm blessed if it touched even one heart. God bless you. - Donna
11/01/05
Donna, I'm just poppping in to let you know that you did very well in the Rain Challenge, ranking 18th out of 147 entries. That's extremely good. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Deb, that is indeed good news. I'm blessed!

And Dub - what a flattering comment. I don't take your crit lightly, and I thank you!