The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/12
Oh this was so beautiful...I simply loved it. Thank you!

Fantastic job and so tranquil. God Bless~
Good job. Well written, like those short, pithy phrases, so full of meaning.
03/20/12
This was so clever and well done. And for the short, tight phrases, you communicate so much foundational truth of the Christian faith ... wonderful work here!
03/20/12
A nicely written poem that expresses the heart of how we feel in gratitude and awe of what the Lord had done and is doing in us.
    What is man that You take thought of him, And the son of man that You care for him? Yet You have made him a little lower than God, And You crown him with glory and majesty! (Psalm 8:4-5 NAS)
You have put across the essence of these verses in your poem very well! Excellent job!
Amazing, I love your economy of words so pregnant with golden truth. Apples of gold in settings of silver. One to be cherished.
03/21/12
Just beautiful and so succinct and expressive. Lovely, Marijo!
03/21/12
Beautiful!