The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/12
Great spiritual application of a classic tale. Good rhythm and rhyme; except I don't see scramble and amble
as visually compatible.

Excellent title and application of the topic.
03/15/12
Oh I loved this! Simply beautiful and flowed so well. I loved the theme, and enjoyed it immensely.
Thank you.

God Bless~
03/18/12
From one poet to another, I truly enjoyed this fun tale retold with a biblical message. The easy flow and unforced rhymes made this a great piece.
03/22/12
Whoa! Super creative! I thoroughly enjoyed this - the mixture of fantasy and Scripture - brilliant! Congrats on your well-placed Editor's Choice!
03/22/12
I totally enjoyed your poetry here. Your message shines. Congrats, Nancy.
03/23/12
This is so creative! Fun, exciting and thought provoking! Loved it!
I enjoyed the twist on this tale. Congratulations on this creative piece of writing!