The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/12
This was a beautiful story, I loved how the little girl wanted to hear a Psalm scripture. Beautifully written too!

Nicely done. God Bless~
03/17/12
Lovely! I was anxious, too wondering if the parents would make it home. From the scenes, I had assumed it was an historical piece - the car stuck by the river at the end threw me. Otherwise, a wonderful story, well written.