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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Achievement (03/08/12)

TITLE: Today Not Tomorrow
By Donna Faehling
03/09/12


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Not enough time,
Not enough money,
Hoping on tomorrow ...

What will happen?
Can I change it?
Hoping on tomorrow …

Straining toward better days,
No more worry,
Hoping on tomorrow …

Reaching for happiness,
Satisfaction eludes me,
Hoping on tomorrow …

I hope, I dream, I imagine,
When, where, what?
Hoping on tomorrow …

Will I, won’t I, can I?
Will it, won’t it, can it?
Hoping on tomorrow …

I will attain, I will be complete,
I will have that, I will be rewarded,
Hoping on tomorrow …

Will he be here, will I be alone?
Will I suffer, what of those I love?
Hoping on tomorrow …

“I will not in any way fail you nor give you up nor leave you without support.
[I will] not, [I will] not, [I will] not in any degree leave you helpless nor forsake
nor let [you] down (relax My hold on you)!
[Assuredly not!]”*

Satisfied, at peace, tomorrow in good hands,
Contentment achieved!
Living in Today!



*(Hebrews 13:5 Amplified Bible)


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CD Swanson 03/15/12
I really liked this poem. It was different. I enjoyed the sequence structure.

Nicely done. God bless~
Hiram Claudio03/16/12
A very simple message with a very vital lesson for us all. Thank you!
Laura Hawbaker 03/16/12
I liked the rhythm and flow of this poem. Good job!
Edmond Ng 03/18/12
Tomorrow is another day, and what the future holds depends on what we do today. Good job on a well written piece. This ia an interesting approach to putting the message across in a poem. God bless.
Leola Ogle 03/20/12
short, sweet and to the point. Good message. God bless!
Kathleen Langridge03/22/12
A crucial truth, sufficient unto the day. I am not knowledgeable on poetry but I like this. You express deep truth simply a talent given by our Lord, for certain.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 03/22/12
Congratulations for placing 10th in level 3!