The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. I didn't expect the ending. I felt at times like you have been peeking in my head and stealing some of my thoughts. Thanks for reminding me that God is always here.
03/08/12
Thank you for this lovely entry. It spoke to my heart. God bless you~
03/13/12
This was ... amazing! I appreciate the tone and dialect chosen. IT gave the story an overall down home and rural wisdom feel - felt like I was sitting and talking with my grand mother, learning for her wisdom and experience.

The MC's perspective is so empowering. The mindset regarding anything that comes our way was just so refreshing. I really enjoyed this work SO very much!
03/13/12
Regardless the situation, God is in control. This message is put across in your story very well. Nicely written.
03/15/12
Congratulations on a wonderful story and a well deserved 2nd place finish!
03/15/12
Congratulations!

Blessings~
03/15/12
This is one of the sweetest pieces I've read. Congratulations!