The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem. It flows easily and I enjoyed the retelling of the familar story.

I admit, I had a hard time seeing the prediciment in it. I see astonishment and even encouragement. I guess the fact that she was what she was and standing near the Messaih could surely feel like a predictament to her.

The beauty of the words matches the wonder of God's grace. None of us deserve it but He wouldn't refuse us the living water if only we ask, no matter what our history is.
03/08/12
Lovely simply lovely. Thank you for this. Great job.
God Bless~
03/12/12
What a wonderful piece of poetry! It flowed so well and was beautifully constructed. Awesome work!
03/13/12
How often I have been at the place where grace was poured!!! This brought tears to my eyes. I loved it. God bless!
03/13/12
A Bible event in a poem. Nice work!
03/15/12
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish and again ... well done!
03/15/12
What a lovely rendition of the marvelous Bible story!