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03/08/12
Your humorous dialogue added to this very funny predicament. Great job!
03/08/12
Well written tale. Cute ending. Nice job and certainly on topic.

God bless~
03/10/12
Ha Ha Ha! I knew she was going to be able to tell something was different, but you got me. I didn't think of eggs.
03/10/12
Oh, that brought back memories of when we "thought" about doing the same thing when we lost a gold fish. Great story and written well. The dialog was funny, even with the overdose of "predicament".I enjoyed this story very much. Eggs? never would have guessed that one..LOL
This is hysterical. I can see why you had fun writing it. The story was a tad predictable, yet I still enjoyed reading it and chuckled to the very end.
03/11/12
This was a fun read and I never expected the eggs. Bang on topic too. Well done!
Fun! I enjoyed your story.