The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/05
Great thoughts! I really liked the way you concluded the piece.
01/17/05
Well put together and I liked the ending too.
01/17/05
Good thoughts and I agree the ending is great
01/18/05
You made me laugh with this piece but you also spoke the truth.
Well written.Quite entertaining, and revealing; who ever said TGIF with the cross in mind before?
Thanks for teaching. Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
01/19/05
The peom at the end was brilliant - particularly the last line. I like the whole teaching about putting Jesus first. From a writing standpoint, seeing as it is submitted at advanced level - "But" and "And" do not usually start a sentence. I think the sentences without them still make sense.
BROVO!
This really was a great article for teaching. I enjoyed it. God bless you.
01/23/05
nice twist on a common phrase