The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/12
Wow!That was some story. Great job with this emotional entry. Excellent job of bringing the MC's conflicted feelings to the core. Big finish.

Good job. God Bless~
03/12/12
Oooh I was almost sick with you! It's an incredibly long time since I had those symptoms but you brought them back fresh to memory. Very good word pictures and most definitely a predicament. I'm relieved she had no intention of terminating the pregnancy - or did she? I wondered if when the tears came it was because of the decision she would make.
Congratulations for placing 8th in Masters and 15th overall!