The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
Oh I loved this! Many of us will relate to this clever piece. Beautifully written, and flowed so smoothly.

Great job of showing the MC's conflict with the natural aging process...I enjoyed it! Thanks.

God Bless you~
03/03/12
This fun and all too true creative piece is hitting very close to home--I can surely relate to some of these verses. Right on with your rhyme and meter--nothing felt forced and that made this an enjoyable read.
I loved your take on aging - it's not turning out to be exactly what I thought it would be either!