The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
This was beautiful. I loved the message and the simplicity of the meaning.

Thank you. God bless you~
This is absolutely beautiful! Your imagery is wonderful. And what a blessing the message is to me today. Thank you.
03/05/12
I loved the "velvet quiet" and the "amber light of dreams." I could feel the soothing words of the Savior wrapping me in a gentle, divine embrace.
03/05/12
Very beautiful!
After reading this the first time, I went back and read it to my six year old. She is snuggled up beside me and she liked it too.
Oh this is so beautiful. Though I'm not very musical I could hear this being sung so easily. The repetition is lovely.
03/06/12
Your last line made me shiver. Lovely, lovely imagery. Well done!
03/06/12
Your last line made me shiver. Lovely, lovely imagery. Well done!
03/08/12
Congratulations! God Bless~
03/08/12
I love this beautiful, sweet poem. I feel peaceful reading it. Congratulations!
06/24/14
I could easily imagine a big ol' burly papa holding his sleeping child while promising to protect him through the night thus allowing the child's dreams to climb unencumbered. Congratulations on having your poem showcased this week. Awesome.