The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
What a beautiful poem. I loved this meaningful and powerful entry. Thank you for this. God Bless you~
03/06/12
We often overlook the simplicity of this message. What a great reminder and this definitely encourages! I love your repeating last line (that is changed by one single word each time). I was tempted (on a reread) to just read the last line of each stanza. Very nice thoughts!
Wow! This is so beautiful and powerful. It's a perfect poem for a memorial in the newspaper or at a funeral. It's also perfect for every day and you touched me deeply with your words

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