The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/05
This is a beautiful poem. Sadness comes in our lives. But eventually we are all reunited, to dance together in the presence of the Lord! Well constructed poetry:)
10/27/05
Lovely!!
10/27/05
Absolutely lovely.
10/27/05
Good job. The simple structure flows and communicates God's gentle love.
10/27/05
Great job on this! A sweet, sentimental read with good flow.
10/27/05
A lovely poem that draws the reader in and makes a person want to spend time in God's presence. Very nice.
10/28/05
Beautiful -I could see our daughter doing this
Just beautiful! You've so captured the rhythm of this special dance in the lines of your poem. Lovely!
I want this one to win. The first line made me cry. I loved this, I loved this, I loved this! That's all I can say!
This is a precious poem! So touching and beautiful!
10/31/05
A very good poem. A couple of beat hic-ups but a delightful story complete with poetic dialog.