The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
This is intense and so full of mental images. I really liked the refrain for that is the true answer.
03/01/12
Beautiful descriptive piece, filled with the MC's internal feelings...and then the powerful conclusion. Amen.

Great job. Thank you.

God Bless~
03/01/12
"a pulsating vibrant love was given to me by You" Loved this! God bless!
03/02/12
"disappearing dreams dropping down doubters' drop
crashed faith brittle smashed to smithereens..."

I liked this line the best. Especially how you showed that God restored the broken dreams and shattered faith.

Well done! Nice style.
03/04/12
I like the way you structured the poem to provide an uplifting contrast one liner between the other stanzas. Well done!