The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely written, but now I want to know what happens next!
02/24/12
Yes I agree! What happens next? This was an interesting story and I wanted more. That is a sign of a good story...Nicely told and done.

God Bless~
This is a nice story, definitely a small part of something bigger. I loved the message and longed to read more.
Congratulations on ranking 14th overall!