The Official Writing Challenge
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Haha, I don't know about that. I like the dark chocolate on my tongue and I'm definitely addicted! Love the clever message and unusual format.
I find that study hard to believe! Tasting is believing. Great poetry!
02/24/12
Great poem with a wonderful message. I loved it. Thank you. God Bless~
02/26/12
I thoroughly enjoyed every portion of this. I do hafta admit to a sudden craving...thanks! Nicely done.
02/26/12
A very clever poem ending with a clear message. I don't see much chocolate because I eat it too fast to get tempted!
I love the last stanza. I chuckled at the beginning because I'm not a big chocolate lover but could still understand your feelings and cravings.
Glad to see this delightful poem with the wonderful message win an EC.
03/01/12
Congratulations on your placement. Beautiful job.

God Bless~
03/01/12
What a delicious take on the topic. Melts in your mouth. Your flair for poetry has earned you yet another win.
Nicely done! The set up and pacing of your logic within the poem simply perfect. Congratulations on your EC placement!