The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/12
Wow - I loved it! Thank you so much. Great job.

God Bless~
02/24/12
I liked this very much. Good dramatic build up with an excellent message at the end.
I really enjoyed this. I've been on retreats where I've been on Faith walks. How true that life is one big faith walk!

You switched POV from the first person in the beginning to the third near the end.

Thgis is spot on for topic and all the while demonstrating a lovely message. You did a brilliant job with this piece.
02/25/12
Clever, insightful, and creative.

Loved it.
02/28/12
This was a very creatively crafted story. I enjoyed the "aha" moment about half way through when I realized who it was that was leading the MC. Very well done with a wonderful messagea at the end.
02/29/12
Loved this, especially the part where Jesus said "I can't tell you or you may try to get there on your own." Isn't that so like us humans? Well written! Good job! God bless!
03/01/12
Congratulations on finishing 3rd in this challenge! Well done.
Congratulations this was one of my favorites
03/01/12
Congratulations on your ribbon. This was a fine story. Well done.

God Bless~
03/01/12
Congratulations on your placement. Great job!