The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/12
Oh what a sheer delight...and I have a feeling I know who this entry belongs to! I kind of guessed the ending...Great job with this, I enjoyed it and the original story line too!

Thanks! God Bless~
02/24/12
What a great story! Loved the ending - I certainly didn't see it coming!
02/26/12
Love surprise endings. You did it well. Good job for an hour's worth of work!
02/26/12
I loved this. I did not see the ending coming. I had pictured a couple of my relatives, one chasing the other around with toilet paper.
02/29/12
Oh you got me! That doesn't happen very often and I'm delighted when it does. Nice job!
03/01/12
Congrats!You deserved this win!
03/01/12
Congratulations on your first place blue ribbon! This was so good...nicely done. I look forward to your next entry.

God bless you~
03/01/12
Wow! CONGRATULATIONS! Loved the idea behind this AND the actual telling of the story. It was all right on topic. Fabulous!
03/01/12
This was a delight to read; and was especially delighted to see that others have a caring heart for all creatures both great and small. Congratulations on your EC.
03/01/12
Wow, what a surprise at the end. A total enjoyment of a read. Thankyou so much! Congrats on your 1st place win.
03/01/12
What a delightful piece! Loved the surprise ending; certainly didn't see that coming. Well done, congratulations!
03/01/12
So happy for your win...Great job!