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10/24/05
Great descriptions and ability to laugh at oneself here.
This was an interesting topic and written very well. One thing I nolyyiced that didn't quit seem right though is in the first paragraph you say driving was out of your realm & opportunity, but third paragraph says getting that type of work was no problem? The two sentences seem to contradidt each other. Overall, I enjoyed this & you used good discriptions.
10/27/05
Good stuff, and a delightful read. Having learned to drive a tractor the hard way at age 12, I can appreciate your worry.
Thanks - oh, the men the shop - they are quite busy of course...:)
10/27/05
I really enjoyed this..and I'm glad you didn't quit, and learned a few things in the process. Isn't that the way it truly is? Lovely story..well done. God bless ya, littlelight
10/27/05
How funny. The men at the shop are sitting around hoping that no one will ask what they do all day:) Great story!
10/28/05
Seems each world has both lessons and mysteries of their own. Good story.
Hahaha! I loved this! Great job!
11/01/05
Very well written. I didn't grow up on a farm, but we were surrounded by them. The neighbor kids learned to drive tractors as soon as they could reach the pedals.