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02/23/12
This was well written and profoundly sad...Sorry about the young man. But, the Lord comforts us and walks with us through all of our trials. There are no answers for things "that do not make sense to us." God knows the reasons why.

I pray that young lady has healed. God Bless~
02/23/12
Much to ponder in this! Maryann's story touched my heart. Thanks for sharing! God bless!
You made some interesting points in this piece. God is there to support us as we follow the road He laid out before us.

Instead of using all caps, use your words or descriptions to show the reader the person is shouting for example you could say something like Shaking my fist in the air, I shouted at God. It will help paint a picture for the reader.

I liked the verses you chose. In everything we are to give thanks. It's not always easy to do, but God never promised to make it easy just to be with us.
02/28/12
This entry truly pauses you and forces you to think and meditate about the deeper and more pressing issues of life. For that ... I thank you!
03/01/12
A good reality check. Thank you.