The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the metaphor of the puppy who perceives himself as a force to reckon with, until he feels the disciplining hand of the Master. Very thought provoking!
Cool! I enjoyed this story. Your opening drew me in and I love that it was only a puppy. The comparison between the "beast" and our sin was great.
Point well made! The difference with dogs (they say) is they cannot always connect actions and consequences. Hmmm...maybe not so different after all. Very well done.