The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/05
I love the metaphor of the puppy who perceives himself as a force to reckon with, until he feels the disciplining hand of the Master. Very thought provoking!
02/07/05
Cool! I enjoyed this story. Your opening drew me in and I love that it was only a puppy. The comparison between the "beast" and our sin was great.
02/10/05
Point well made! The difference with dogs (they say) is they cannot always connect actions and consequences. Hmmm...maybe not so different after all. Very well done.