The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story. I enjoyed how you told it. I noticed near the end you stopped double-spacing between paragraphs. When quoting people make sure you start a new paragraph for each speaker, even if it is one or two words. I enjoyed the creative take on the topic. The last line made me giggle.
02/16/12
Wonderful job with this. I really loved reading it. Good job with the story and dialogue. Great last line!

Nicely done.

God Bless you~
02/20/12
Wonderfully entertaining story. I enjoyed the MC's voice.

I would love to know whether this is fiction or non.

Well done.
02/21/12
What a sweet, sweet, delightful story. Wow, 105! Good for Addie! God bless!
02/23/12
CONGRATULATIONS! Good job!
02/23/12
Oh how funny, that last comment at the end. What a fun read. Congratulations on your win.
02/23/12
Congratulations! God Bless~