The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an interesting story. My heart broke with the despair of the MC. I liked the ending. I thought at first maybe the boyfriend had been misunderstood and sent her there instead or that she somehow wrote the address down wrong.

My little red ink is okay should be written out or both letters capitalized-OK.

Nice job of writing on topic while delivering a great message.
02/16/12
Wow - powerful! I loved this, it gave me chills at the end. I didn't see this coming. But, felt it was something the MC was struggling with and totally "against."

Amazing how the Lord will bring about "different pathways" for a different outcome. Loved it.

God Bless~
02/21/12
Yay for Angie! Good writing and a great story! God bless!
Congratulations for ranking 9th in level three!