The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/12
Oh, this is awesome. I felt like counseling the MC when she was with the voodoo/card reader. And I loved the ending.
02/18/12
Excellent story full of suspense and wonderful descriptions. I love the portrayal of the fortune teller; it was chilling when she grabbed the MCs arm, I felt like I was there with her. And the ending, superb! Full of hope and REAL truth, the only actual truth. So very well done.
02/19/12
Beautiful job with this! I loved it from beginning to end. The truth was resounding throughout this entry. Nicely done.
God Bless~
02/21/12
Excellent storytelling. Truth, suspense, heartache and hope all in one.
This is an excellent story. Lots of tension and a great ending. Well done!
02/23/12
Oh, how I love the story line here! Especially when Madam asks, "You want the truth?" Marvelous. Congrats on your EC!
02/23/12
Congratulations on your well deserved win! This story was awesome. So well written, I was engrossed beginning to end. The simple ending of the church door opening is so powerful! Terrific job!

02/23/12
Congratulations! God Bless~
03/11/12
Well crafted, superb article. It highlights how our heavenly Father often comes to find us...in that surprising moment of love.