The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this is awesome. I felt like counseling the MC when she was with the voodoo/card reader. And I loved the ending.
Excellent story full of suspense and wonderful descriptions. I love the portrayal of the fortune teller; it was chilling when she grabbed the MCs arm, I felt like I was there with her. And the ending, superb! Full of hope and REAL truth, the only actual truth. So very well done.
Beautiful job with this! I loved it from beginning to end. The truth was resounding throughout this entry. Nicely done.
God Bless~
Excellent storytelling. Truth, suspense, heartache and hope all in one.
This is an excellent story. Lots of tension and a great ending. Well done!
Oh, how I love the story line here! Especially when Madam asks, "You want the truth?" Marvelous. Congrats on your EC!
Congratulations on your well deserved win! This story was awesome. So well written, I was engrossed beginning to end. The simple ending of the church door opening is so powerful! Terrific job!

Congratulations! God Bless~
Well crafted, superb article. It highlights how our heavenly Father often comes to find that surprising moment of love.