The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/12
Excellent entry! This was so creative told with humor and a great message intertwined. I want to read it again!
02/18/12
Clever, creative, and humorous. Some unclear phrasing in the first paragraph -"face the fact of our identity." I Love how you introduce and develop the biblical characters.

02/19/12
A brilliant entry- well written and well told.
I enjoyed this. Nicely done.
God Bless~
CONGRATULATIONS ON THIS FRESH, CREATIVE PIECE. WOW AMAZING. look HOW FAR YOU HAVE COME! I'M SOOOOO HAPPY FOR YOU!
02/23/12
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win! This story was terrific! So unique and creative—such fun to read, yet carries such an important message! Just a wonderful job!
02/23/12
Congratulations! God Bless~
This was an interesting story - very creative. It reads like a dream with subtle segues from one bend of the idea to the next, all connected, and ending with the very solid story of David being anointed out of all of Jesse's sons. Well done!
03/07/12
Extremely creative! I had no idea it was about David and his brothers until the end. Marvelous job and congrats on your big win!