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Violent suspense swirling through God's serene wilderness. And who do you suppose wins?

Loved this!
Wow - that was filled with heart palpitations and nail biting moments. Good job.
God Bless~
Beautifully written.
At one point you flit between different tenses and it's distracting("The nearest place to find help was at least a half-mile away"); it would be better to stick with the present.
Well done for keeping the suspense going all the way to the end.
Love this! So many emotions, wrapped up beautifully!

Great work...loved every (perfect) word of it.

I caught myself holding my breath, praying right along with the MC.

Sweet ending..

Well crafted nail-bitter. I loved the 'hand language.' The whole scene depicted a couple whose relationship was one of deep love and trust. I enjoyed the read.
Amazing writing! The suspense was killing me!