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02/17/12
Violent suspense swirling through God's serene wilderness. And who do you suppose wins?

Loved this!
02/17/12
Wow - that was filled with heart palpitations and nail biting moments. Good job.
God Bless~
Beautifully written.
At one point you flit between different tenses and it's distracting("The nearest place to find help was at least a half-mile away"); it would be better to stick with the present.
Well done for keeping the suspense going all the way to the end.
02/18/12
Love this! So many emotions, wrapped up beautifully!

Great work...loved every (perfect) word of it.

I caught myself holding my breath, praying right along with the MC.

Sweet ending..



Well crafted nail-bitter. I loved the 'hand language.' The whole scene depicted a couple whose relationship was one of deep love and trust. I enjoyed the read.
02/21/12
Amazing writing! The suspense was killing me!