The Official Writing Challenge
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Ohh this was good. I really liked the wrestling with the angel scene. You had a creative take on the topic. Though angel stories are common, I thought it was clever to tell it from the POV of the angel.
02/16/12
This was so good! I truly enjoyed it from beginning to end. Nicely done - and well written. Clever use of topic. Thank you.
God bless~
02/16/12
Loved the telling of Jacob's fight with the angel from the angel's viewpoint - a fresh approach.
The switch to the present was very creative, though the parallel may have been even sharper if Dan had been the cheat as Jacob was.
But you've packed a lot of detail into the word-limit; so well done.
02/17/12
Loved this take on the topic. Well written! Oh, and Dan Devine-clever name! Made me smile-thought he was going to be a televangelist! LOL God bless!