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You really brought these verses to life. Your dialog and thoughts felt so real. Though I have read several stories of the crucifixion this week, you approached it from a different angle. Nicely done.
Wow, I agree, you did bring these Scriptures to life. I loved the way you took us for a journey into this man's last thoughts. I loved the wonderful words ending too.
Beautiful job - such a good entry. I love stories of the Bible in entries, always enjoy them-and this was no different. Great job.
God Bless~
This was so good! I love the retelling of known bible stories from a different vantage point or with a twist. It really does bring it to life and make it more revelent. Very nice job!
I really like this perspective, you did a great job. What a sense of relief Zach would have felt at those words! Well done.
Truly those would be the most astonishing words Zech would ever hear… like the most astonishing words every Christian hopes to hear on Judgment Day: "Well done, good and faithful servant!" I enjoyed this read!
Oh..this gave me goosebumps! Great re-tell of one the most wonderful stories in the Bible.

Really like this! Alot!