The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/12
WOW! Brilliant writing! From conception to birth and it didn't click with me until the last line. What a clever take on the topic. This is going to be an entry I'll remember.
02/10/12
I had to read this a couple of times before I got it. Wonderful!
02/11/12
This was a lot of fun...on the second read. First time around it makes you think something bad is happening until you get toward the end. Then, rereading it in a different light, it makes perfect sense.
02/12/12
This was truly an original piece. I was enthralled from the first sentence to the last word. Nice job!
God Bless~
02/12/12
I really like this. The process of fertilization and birth is truly astonishing. I used to be a labor and delivery nurse and a birth was always a miracle no matter how many times I witnessed it.

I liked the set-up though I fear there may be some people who don't get it. I think it is a very creative POV and right on topic.
02/16/12
This is an amazing entry! So unique and certainly an unexpected POV! It fits the challenge word perfectly because the creation of every new life is truly astonishing! Kudos!
02/16/12
Congratulations for ranking 20th overall