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All I can feel is the cold metal. Truly chilling. Well done and I will pray that it works out as you desire. Sounds like it was more than just a "bump in the road."
02/12/12
I am glad you weren't "severely hurt." Praise God. Will keep you in prayer. Good job with this--different and sweeping saga. God Bless~
I enjoyed this and definitely is a unique take on the topic. I just said a prayer for you.
02/13/12
Oh, nice job with this one.

To me, this was just a bit weak on topic. But that could just be me. :)

You captured the anxiety and feelings well.
Isn't it interesting that the frigid temps coincided with the troubles mounting? Good writing.
02/16/12
Just reading about those temps made me shiver, without having to be out in it. And then an accident...another shiver. I don’t quite understand why you even went out in those temps—it must have been important and thank God you are okay. It is astonishing how a day can change everything. I will certainly be praying for you!