The Official Writing Challenge
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Oohhh, I wish you could have seen my face as I was reading this! You gave me a delightful, deep, belly laugh at the end! I got it this time, but it gives me chills wondering how you manage to come up with such stories! I really needed that laugh- thanks!
02/10/12
Wow - Never saw that ending coming! Good job with this entry. I liked it.
Clever and well written.
God bless~
02/13/12
Really funny ending ... and the story was so compelling that it drew you in and held you throughout. A wonderful piece of writing!
02/15/12
At first I felt so sorry for this poor little miss-fit with his tractor obsession. My motherly instincts turned to delight when the salesman got his comeuppance. Then the Mr Bean stunt that landed him in hospital made me wonder where on earth we were going next.
The punch line was a pearler and tickled me pink!
I'm pleased to know you brought your humour back from the trip.
How many rolled overboard laughing all the way!