The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh I just adore this piece. Through the whole story I kept visualizing the soon to emerge butterfly. And in a very warm way, I could really relate. Ha Ha
So smooth and flowy. Loved it.
This is lovely and quite poetic. I may be a bit dense but I totally didn't get what was going on until I read the comment. Then I reread this piece and could really picture the beauty you captured with your words.
02/12/12
This was so lovely. It captured me from beginning to end. Great job with this!
Thanks - God bless~
02/16/12
I love the poem you formed from the scripture. What an amazing visual of the weight of sin and the freedom with it gone. Great job on this!