The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this story and have no doubt that things just like this are happening right now. You grabbed my attention and kept me interested from beginning to end. I like the fresh approach to the topic, too.
02/10/12
Great job with this entry. It mesmerized me - and truly grabbed my attention.
God Bless~
02/11/12
I really liked this new angle. So often, we think that God might only have us reach out because someone needs salvation. We pick it apart to find justification for obeying instead of just doing it and leaving the results to Him.
02/13/12
Well written and a great application of the topic. I love it when God does things like this in our lives. Makes one wonder how many "divine appointments" we've all missed because we tried to figure things out first. Well done!
02/13/12
Oh, I love this. God was speaking to both of them, yet neither of them got quite what they were expecting. :) Nice job.
I would love to read more about these two.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level three!
03/03/12
Very descriptive, inviting approach to the topic, with a great title.
Love how you have conveyed the sense of atmosphere and the converging inner dialogue between your characters. well done.