The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/12
Oh wow. I absolutely LOVE this! Very nice job.
02/12/12
Absolutely beautiful. This poem is outstanding in so many areas. To mention a few - I loved how it flowed so effortlessly. I loved the meaning behind the entire piece. I loved the descriptive words and metaphors.

And, finally the conclusion was "astonishingly powerful" I loved this.

Great job. God Bless~
Oh I like this. I also have wondered how people can't see the obvious. It reminded me a tad of the song What a Wonderful World. Nice job.
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