The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow you covered the topic in so many ways. I'm impressed. The mere thought of Jesus' sacrifice is astonishing, then you add that someone would say so what- again another angle on the topic! Though normally, I might say a dream sequence is an easy literary tool, in this case it once again shows the length the Holy Spirit goes to to make sure we understand. Again- Amazing! Well done on this trifecta.
Oh my Gosh! I totally loved this. It was sooooo good. I really loved the surprise ending. Wow, so, so, so awesome!!!
02/10/12
Absolutely one of my favorites. This was not only a well written entry-it kept me enthralled througout the entire story. Loved the shocking and surprising ending!

I loved the descriptive verses, and the dialogue-brilliant. Great job - this will score high with the "judges." I expect to see this in the winner's circle for sure.

God Bless~
Very engaging story. Nicely done
This was good especially for the season that is almost here.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level three!