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10/25/05
Very nice. The title is great - something we should all keep foremost in our minds! God bless!
10/26/05
He shows us the way when we turn to Him and He sends the rainbow as His promise. Nice entry.
10/26/05
This is a lovely memoir of your passage into victory. You went back and forth from past to present tense; present tense would work very nicely in this type of piece. A few edits, and this will be an excellent devotional.
10/28/05
When we pray for God's help, even if His answer is "Not yet" or "No" something happens in us, that makes us end our prayers with "Thy will be done Lord." Whether we get what we've asked for or not, we now only want to please God. Thanks for sharing this piece:)
Good message!
11/03/05
Your choice of words is like art. I especially love the sentence, "A holy stillness envelops my restless spirit, as His loving arms embrace me." And the way you end with the rainbow as you trust in God. Beautiful!