The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting!it kept me reading. I was expecting a bit different ending, but you surprised me and when I thought about it, I liked this one better :)
I enjoyed this. Though it did irritate me that people who have no income have fancy gadgets that should have been downsized when they lost their job. I think the Bible verse is a perfect fit. Unemployment- a very modern take on the topic!
02/03/12
Fantastic job of expressing emotions and depictions that are so very real today.

I enjoyed this very much.
Nicely done. God Bless~