The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/12
Nicely done - and you nailed the topic perfectly.
God Bless~
Masterful.
All five senses totally engaged.
Love this
02/08/12
I love the ending line of each stanza. This shows the sacrificial love of a father for his family. Great poem!
02/08/12
Engrossing poetry. I like the gentle rhythm of your words, and the last line of each stanza giving sound to the action. Beautiful.
This is good. I love the imagery, the weariness. Just reading it makes me tired. The sounds at the end of the verses tie it all together so nicely. Well done!
02/09/12
Beautiful descriptions and images. The topic is spot on. Congratulations on a great win!
02/09/12
Superb. I love your down to earth style. Congratulations!
02/09/12
Congratulations on a well deserved win! This was simply amazing! A masterpiece of tribute to the many who go to unrewarding jobs and suffer through the drudgery of each day, driven by the love for their family. Kudos!!!
02/10/12
Congrats...God Bless~