The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/12
Fascinating analogy! I love your Biblical references! I wanted to read this several times.
Good job keeping me guessing as to who the MC was. I figured it out near the end. Very interesting perspective on the topic! Thanks for the explanation about the Paradise Lost story, too. I haven't read it and was puzzled by that part in the poem.
02/08/12
Wow! The personification is amazing. Well done!
Congratulations for ranking 13th in level 4 and 13th overall!