The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done...Good message and well written.
God Bless~
A very nice piece and a great message for us all. Nicely done.
Two entries in a row on trust. Hmmmm....God must surely be speaking to some of us. LOL Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. God bless!
Great message, nicely written.

The first sentence sticks out in my mind. "He stood with anger in his eyes." And I wonder, what would a person look like if they had anger in their eyes? The only reason this question comes to me is that I've been listening to all the writing advice-givers talk about how it's better to show an emotion than to say the word for it.

Anyway, I enjoyed the flow of the message, seamless from beginning to end.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level 3!