The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww. Sweet story. Thank you for this...God bless~
Wonderful ... absolutely wonderful! This felt so real. You could feel the struggle between the husband and wife, the tenderness as the children tried to make it 'all better,' and the time alone with God the wife found. Such powerful images in a very real and everyday situation.

And the message ... to trust and lean in Him. This was splendid. Thank you SO much!
We all need to be reminded to trust in God and let Him be our source! Thanks for sharing. God bless!
Oh my goodness, this piece dragged me though a series of emotions (forgive me Marlo, for being so angry with you at the beginning), and then through a fantastic depiction of this crazy roller coaster we call life.

Loved the ending!